1. What do you like about nature? Why?
2. What you don't like about nature? Why?
3. What is your relationship with nature?
Kids will answer by themselves and they comment other's posts.
martes, 15 de enero de 2013
OUR RELATIONSHIP WITH NATURE.
During this month the book's project is about nature, so to realize what kids know about nature, they will start answering three questions.
1. What do you like about nature? Why?
2. What you don't like about nature? Why?
3. What is your relationship with nature?
Kids will answer by themselves and they comment other's posts.
1. What do you like about nature? Why?
2. What you don't like about nature? Why?
3. What is your relationship with nature?
Kids will answer by themselves and they comment other's posts.
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I like the animals in nature because I help us and we are beautiful.
ResponderEliminarI don,t like the spiders.
That is beautiful and we are many animals.
Camila.
Camila:
EliminarMaybe you meant that animals are beautiful, so the correct sentence would be: "I like animals because THEY help us and THEY are beautiful".
Why don't you like spiders?
Finally, I don't understand what you meant in last sentence.
Love,
Miss Cynthia.
Yes because make oxigen
ResponderEliminarEnithink because is very importan
The peaple and the nature live
Edmann Sven
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EliminarEdmann:
EliminarI think you need to re-read the questions carefully. I believe that your answers are not saying what you like and don't like about nature.
Miss Cynthia.
I like nature landscapes because they have many different kind of animals and temperatures.
ResponderEliminarI don't like nature because they can kill you.
My relationship with nature is good because I care here
Tamara
Tamara:
EliminarGreat job!! I only have two things to say:
1. When you talk about nature, you should use "it" not "they".
2. When you say that you care about nature, maybe would be better if you say: "...because I care abou it."
The rest is perfect, congratulations!!
Miss Cynthia.
I like plants because plants take out oxygen and bee collect
ResponderEliminarThe polen
Ian
Ian:
EliminarYou only answered one question, remember you should answer all of them and give a reason for each one.
I understand that sometimes writing with the ipad is difficult because it changes some words.
You can do it better.
Miss Cynthia.
I like some parts of nature. I like the landscape,the sun,the sea, the river, the plants and the animals.
ResponderEliminarI don't like the insects: the bee,mosquitos, fly etc.
I like swim in the river.
Vanessa
Vanessa:
EliminarYour sentences are fine, but you forgot giving reasons. Why do you like the sun,the sea, rivers, etc? Also with the insects, Why don't you like them?
Don't be affraid of maiking mistakes when you write, that's the only way of learning new things.
Good job.
Miss Cynthia.
I like the plants because make oxigen.
ResponderEliminarThe persons because they cut the trees.
My relationship with nature is with the animals.
Santiago
Santiago:
EliminarI think your sentences are very good. I only need to say two thigs:
1. Remember the correct word is PEOPLE, not persons.
2. The first sentence is very clear, however you may write it like this: "I like plants because they make oxygen."
Can you tell me the difference?
Anyway, congratulations!!
Miss Cynthia.
!Mi favorite think in the nature are the animals ¡
ResponderEliminar!I don't like the wild animals ¡
The World
Andrés
Andres:
EliminarTo think is an action, I think you meant THING.
You forgot to give reasons.
Finally you could be more specific because I don't understand if you like or dislike animals.
And what about the world? What did you mean?
Miss Cynthia.
I like the trees because the trees give oxigen.
ResponderEliminarI Don' t like the Mosquitos because mosquitos bite.
My relationship with nature is the 2 people have fillings.
CHELSEA
Chelsea:
EliminarI don't understand the last sentence, maybe you can rewrite it.
The rest is perfect, just tell me how do you spell OXYGEN?
Congratuilations!!
Miss Cynthia.
The animals with is precus
ResponderEliminar2 the insects with is ogly
3the trees with the tree gifth air
Omar
Omar:
EliminarI think that I understand your ideas, but let me say that the sentences are not correct.
Be careful, I know you can make it!
Miss Cynthia.
The plants because are beautiful
ResponderEliminarEnithing because is very important
The oxygen
Dara
Dara:
EliminarTell me the difference between your sentences and these:
1. The plants because they are beautiful.
2. Everything because it's very important.
3. The oxygen.
Now, the third one is not a sentence and I don't know what do you mean. The second one, are you saying that you don't like anything in nature and at the same time that everything is important? I don't get it.
Please rewrite again.
Miss Cynthia.
Hi kids!!
ResponderEliminarI just checked your writing, I answered on your comments, however let me remind you that every sentence must include a subject, in this case each of you are the subject because you're talking about what you like and dislike.
Great job kids!!
Miss Cynthia.